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:icongwennafran:
This is a really cute setup with two charming characters. It's hard for me to see what the child is sitting on, but I'm guessing that will help once you add some colour.
One thing I think you should be careful with is the characters arms. Almost all four arms looks a little more bendy than what is physically possible. The bones within your arms are more or less very straight, with the elbow and wrist being almost like mechanical joints. Only the elbow and wrist bends. Not the rest of the arm around these two. If you use a ruler, you should be able to draw a line from shoulder to elbow and from elbow to wrist. Think of those lines as your inner bones.
Also, I think you could add some really tiny wings to the girl without covering up the mother completely. That could be really cute.
PS. Low scores because this is a badly scanned WIP sketch. ;)
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:iconlinnzy:
*Linnzy May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the help ^_^

anatomy is not my strong side, but i do try :)
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:icongwennafran:
*Gwennafran May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, using references is a great start. :D
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