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:icongwennafran:
Art trade with :iconkittyocean:. It's her character Effhaah. A goddess/High One that seem to have a few things in common with Delirium of The Endless.

Always changing and no longer able to remember what she used to be like as a child. Effhaah seems to have lost some grip on reality as experienced in the mortal world.

Time: 4 hours 15 minutes.
Media: Sakura micron pigment inks, Photoshop CS2
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~madcarrot Jun 4, 2009
Mmm, colourful, and somuchhair~!

I'm not great at critique, so I'm not going to use that little critique app, but my major crit here would be that I think her head is a bit big for her body, and her left arm too short - I realise she has her shoulder pulled up there, but I think it's still a bit too short overall. Also, I think her teeth need a bit more shading on them so you can tell they're really behind her lips and in her mouth. :)

Otherwise, this looks lovely. Her hair does look really good - very nice and flowy.

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"You don't know what you're talking about. You're not very smart, and the things you're saying are nonsense. And I'm not angry. But you do need to shut up." - Tycho, Penny Arcade
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*Gwennafran Jun 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think that's pretty good CC. :)

I tend to make big heads. Seriously, I can never judge that. ;)
Right now I think the arm fits, although I certainly get your point. When I measured out the sketch it made perfect sense, though. I might very well be wrong, but on the other hand reality just sometimes look weird. ;)

I forgot about the teeth. It all made sense back around the base colours, where everything were large blocks. Then suddenly I had semi-realistic shadowing, and nothing that fitted the teeth properly (I should have made actual teeth rather than just a block of white). Instead of actually fixing it, I just made a temporarily lazy solution. And then I got lost in the hair... X)
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*kittyocean Jun 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Her hair.... that is so amazing! I'm at a loss of words... I mean, it looks simply perfect! The hair is so amazing; ever flowing and changing. Plus I like the combo from grey to teal; who knows, maybe that's another possible combo for her!
And how you described her... even better than I did XP No sense of reality any more; that is soooo Effhaah!

I bow into eternal dust for you :worship:

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:snowflake: Kitty 'Kitt' Ocean
Studio Tsunami: All about Serenay Moon, Forever Young, Kitty Ocean and more!
'Everybody tells me I'm smart, and then I laugh about their stupidity'
Sea Turtles rule!
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*Gwennafran Jun 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you like it. :D

DA was mean and gave me 503 error-messages. So you actually found this before I could tell you about it. X) Would you like a high resolution version without watermarks? Just note me your mail, then. :)
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*kittyocean Jun 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I would sooooo love that! I wished I could say I have a higher resolution, but my scanner is not that nice any more XD

Oh yeah, DA gave me that too XP I just hit F5/refresh all the time XP

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:snowflake: Kitty 'Kitt' Ocean
Studio Tsunami: All about Serenay Moon, Forever Young, Kitty Ocean and more!
'Everybody tells me I'm smart, and then I laugh about their stupidity'
Sea Turtles rule!
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*Gwennafran Jun 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It should be in the mail now. :)
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